cj Sez: This is the last Lyrical Pens post of this year and a good time for me to reflect on the stresses of 2020 as I optimistically look forward to happier and healthier 2021.
cj
cj Sez: This is the last Lyrical Pens post of this year and a good time for me to reflect on the stresses of 2020 as I optimistically look forward to happier and healthier 2021.
For you romance writers, if your protagonist exclaimed that
the earth stood still when her lover kissed her, she might be right—depending on
when the kiss happened. How is that so, you ask?
It’s because for several days before and after each summer
or winter solstice, the sun appears to stand still in
the sky, i.e., the sun actually pauses in its path at a northern or southern
limit before reversing direction… for two or three days.
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That’s it for
today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.
cj Sez: CONGRATULATIONS TO THE DETERMINED MILLIONS!
(From Sisters In Crime … their Facebook site press release):
7,258,625!
That's how many words were reported from participants of our
#SinC50K #NaNoWriMo challenge in
November! Congratulations, everyone!
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Let's talk a bit about opening lines, and the importance of a good, inviting
opening line, opening paragraph, or opening chapter.
There’s a lot of advice that says start a story in the middle of a drama, some captivating situation. This is the hook with which a writer can snag the reader’s, or agent’s, interest.
Ken Follet, in The Pillars of the Earth, starts off with “The small boys came early to the hanging.” Wouldn’t you want to find out more?
One of my personal favorites is from Prison Letters, Corrie ten Boom’s memoir of her time in a WWII concentration camp: “From time to time, I wrote short sketches on scraps of paper.”
In a 2013 interview with Joe Fassler, Stephen King said: “An opening line should invite the reader to begin the story.” He goes on to say, “For me a good opening sentence really begins with voice.” He thinks readers are drawn to the story because of the voice of the writer.
In the opening-line examples above, I believe you can get a good sense of the author’s voice, how the rest of the story is going to be told.
Authors know (for sure) that introductory lines are hard to write. They also generally change as the writer gets further into the story. King, himself, said it used to take him months or even years to settle on an opening line. (I doubt it takes him years now, considering how prolific and masterful a writer he is.) He also said, “A really bad first line can convince me not to buy a book—because, god, I’ve got plenty of books already—and an unappealing style in the first moments is reason enough to scurry off.”
Wow, would I hate that. All those hours and months wasted because I blew the first line. I try to develop first lines that fit both the story and the genre.
Here’s my first line for my romantic suspense (ala Jane
Bond-style) Deadly Star:
“I am not going to die; I am not going to die.”
And for Choosing
Carter:
Bryn McKay’s body ricocheted off the passenger door as the pickup, engine roaring, veered from one side of the Colorado mountain road to the other.
For the untitled detective mystery I’ve just finished:
“We bury our dead alive, don’t we?”
Do you start your stories in an active scene? Are you in
narrative voice? Please make sure the opening is not in backstory.
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With this year of turmoil coming to a close, I’ve been thinking of people and places I miss. Coincidences being what they are, someone posted this question on Facebook: When you think of home, what do you think of?
What I think of is sitting around the kitchen table harmonizing on old hymns with my sisters and my mother. I think of childhood-me sleeping with the window open under a warm blanket in the chill of a starry July night in West Texas. Precious and happy memories.
When you think of home, what do you
think of?
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Books are Christmas gifts that keep on giving year-round, and anthologies are even better because there’s more than one story to read. With that in mind, let me help you out with a wonderful gift idea: Seven short stories for less than a buck!
HOMEROOM HEROES, Bienvenue Press’s upcoming charity anthology for 2020, is available now for the preorder price of 99 cents! Better hurry, tho. The price goes up on launch date—December 15. Buy Now.
Better yet, it’s a two-fer: Buy a book and part of the proceeds benefit the Acadiana Writing Project.
HOMEROOM HEROES joins HOMETOWN HEROES and FINALLY HOME as the third in a series of anthologies published by Bienvenue Press benefiting various charities. All are free on Kindle Unlimited.
From paranormal to contemporary to historical, there's something in all three anthologies to fill everyone with the spirit of the season. Look for them on Amazon and other fine book sellers.
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cj
P.S. My stand-alone suspense novels are out of print on Amazon, but The Haunted Bookshop has signed copies in stock. TO ORDER my autographed books or any book of your choice on-line from a favorite, indie bookstore, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us
"When FBI agent Aron Olsen is assigned to work undercover as a substitute adapted physical education teacher for physically and mentally challenged students, he knows he’ll need a lot of help. He is thrilled when his help appears in the beautiful form of first-grade teacher Melanie Andrews, who is also a Special Olympics volunteer. Together they learn to turn their can'ts into cans and their dreams into plans."HOMEROOM HEROES joins HOMETOWN HEROES and FINALLY HOME as the third in a series of anthologies published by Bienvenue Press benefiting various charities. All are free on Kindle Unlimited.
Changing Your World One Story at a Time®
And cj's tip for readers…these are great books for your to-be-read stack.
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Nearing the home
stretch and worried you aren’t going to succeed? Here are some words from Kurt
Vonnegut:
“When
I was 15, I spent a month working on an archeological dig. I was talking to one
of the archeologists one day during our lunch break and he asked those kinds of
“getting to know you” questions you ask young people: Do you play sports?
What’s your favorite subject? And I told him, no I don’t play any sports. I do
theater, I’m in choir, I play the violin and piano, I used to take art classes.
And
he went WOW. That’s amazing! And I said, “Oh no, but I’m not any good at ANY of
them.”
And
he said something then that I will never forget and which absolutely blew my
mind because no one had ever said anything like it to me before: “I don’t think
being good at things is the point of doing them. I think you’ve got all these
wonderful experiences with different skills, and that all teaches you things
and makes you an interesting person, no matter how well you do them.”
And that honestly changed my life. Because I went from a failure, someone who hadn’t been talented enough at anything to excel, to someone who did things because I enjoyed them. I had been raised in such an achievement-oriented environment, so inundated with the myth of Talent, that I thought it was only worth doing things if you could “Win” at them.”
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John Floyd is a prolific author (he’s written 32 stories in 2020), and his short mysteries are favorites of mine. In a recent Sleuth Sayers column, he recounts how he reworks old, unsubmitted stories he’s had stashed away for years and then submits them…some moved on to become award winners. Maybe there are points you would find worthwhile…I sure did: https://www.sleuthsayers.org/2020/11/the-same-old-story.html?fbclid=IwAR05pLxJJr9NcZGJ1E4LtmsAc7WUbYRHLjUfSrMxkikY1mBmwGyGoTSFP_0
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From paranormal to contemporary to historical, there's something in this anthology to fill everyone with the spirit of the season.
On Amazon: https://amzn.to/3ncvCS5
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99 CENTS !! PREORDER PRICE for Bienvenue Press’s upcoming charity anthology HOMEROOM HEROES. Look for it on Amazon Saturday, December 5. The final cover reveal coming soon.
In “The Substitute,” my short story in the anthology, an FBI agent’s undercover assignment as a substitute teacher gets complicated when he falls in love with a first-grade grade teacher. Here are the opening lines:
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➜ Follow me . . .
You can’t wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club. — Jack London
cj Sez: On Wednesday
this week, the U.S. respectfully observes Veterans Day, a day set aside to honor
all the veterans whose heroism made and keep this country free.
“When first celebrated as Armistice Day, the day marked the end of World War I, formally recognized on the '11th hour, of the 11th day, of the 11th month' in 1918.
“Today we continue to celebrate the day as Veterans Day,
still recognizing the original tie with November 11. That means Veterans Day is
on the same day every year—November 11—regardless of on which day of the week it
falls.” (Source: https://www.military.com/veterans-day
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NaNoWriMo
If you’re taking part in the challenge, GOPHERIT!
"Find your best time of the day for writing and write.
Don’t let anything else interfere. Afterwards it won’t matter to you that the
kitchen is a mess." — Esther Freud
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I won a prize!
Surprise, surprise, and thank you, thank you! I liked and shared the Facebook post of the Mobile Bookseller, Independent Bookstore, and my name was entered into a drawing to win a prize …
“Congratulations cj petterson! You are the winner of the Paranormal Romance starter set giveaway!
“Thank you for all of your shares, everyone!! And don't worry,
there will be another giveaway before 2020 finally ends. Maybe a little
somethin' somethin' for Christmas? Be on the lookout!
Facebook Link: Mobile Bookseller
“We sell or trade previously Loved books! Most of our books are priced around $3.50! If we don't have it, we can order it! We also have a nice collection of NEW Local Author books, and most of them are signed!”
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That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.
cj
P.S.:
Anthologies make great gifts...timeless short stories from
different authors for hours of entertainment.
Great news...These digital two-fers from Bienvenue Press are on sale during the month of November—Buy an anthology, support a charity: HOMETOWN HEROES benefits the Cajun Navy (that marvelous group of volunteers helping neighbors after storm floods) and FINALLY HOME benefits various animal rescue groups.
Be sure to watch for their soon-to-be-released next Christmas charity anthology: HOMEROOM HEROES to benefits the Acadiana Writing Project.
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Buy Now
HALLOWEEN PIECES
The latest anthology from the Mobile Writers Guild has 18 pieces in it.
Available on Amazon (free on Kindle Unlimited)—and several of the authors have signed a limited supply of copies available from The Haunted Bookshop (see where to order below).
TO ORDER my autographed books or any book of your choice on-line from my favorite indie bookstore, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us