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Sunday, August 28, 2022

So, how much do you know about apostrophes?

cj Sez: How to properly use an apostrophe in some plurals has always plagued me, especially when input from critique readers challenges me.

  I always have to get on the Internet and search for verification, so I decided to go to THE source for writers: The Chicago Manual of Style. I thought I'd share some of my findings with you. 

  A Google search for how to use apostrophes gave me the following excerpts of questions from wordsmiths and answers provided by a CMOS correspondent:

Plural Names

Q. My boyfriend and I are having a battle royal over the use of apostrophes in plural names. In his PhD dissertation he repeatedly refers to a family by the name of Wallace. When he refers to them in the plural, he insists that the correct form is “the Wallace’s,” which seems entirely incorrect to me. I hold that it should be “the Wallaces,” just like “the McDonalds” or “the McPartlands” or “the DeVitos.” He is backing up his position with the example “the G.I.s,” which he insists should be pluralized as “the G.I.’s.” Please help. This is ruining our dinner conversation! 

Shame on this school.
Correct plural is Veterans!!
A. Usually in such arguments, the woman is right. Yours is no exception. The plural of names of persons and other capitalized nouns is usually formed with the addition of s or es. An apostrophe is never used to form the plural of family names. Write “the Wallaces,” “the Joneses,” the “Jordans,” etc. See paragraph 7.8 of the sixteenth edition of CMOS for the full statement of the applicable rule. As for G.I., Chicago style is GI (no periods), the plural of which we write as GIs. See 10.4 and 7.14.

Possessives and Attributives

Q. When indicating possession of a word that ends in s, is it correct to repeat the s after using an apostrophe? For example, which is correct: “Dickens’ novel” or “Dickens’s novel”?

A. Either is correct, though we prefer the latter. Please consult 7.15–18 for a full discussion of the rules for forming the possessive of proper nouns. For a discussion of the alternative practice of simply adding an apostrophe to form the possessive of proper nouns ending in s, see paragraph 7.21.

Q. I have suddenly become an editor and am having trouble on a daily basis with the numeric use of decades. First, is “the 90s” or “the ’90s” correct? We often see the apostrophe omitted these days. Next, if a sentence contains the phrase, “Perhaps the 70s best director . . .” (meaning, the best director of that decade), “70s” is both plural and possessive. Should it be “70’s”? “70s’”? Other than reconstructing the sentence, what’s an editor to do? 

A. Strictly speaking, ’90s, with the apostrophe, is correct.

"The ’70s’ finest director was Martin Scorsese, particularly for his work on Alice Doesn’t Live Here Anymore and Taxi Driver."

Note the apostrophes, both of them. You are always free to write “seventies’ finest.” Or, “The finest director of the ’70s was assuredly Francis Ford Coppola, for his work on the first two Godfather films and Apocalypse Now.” 

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cj Sez: By the by, instead of popping for $50+ dollars to buy The Chicago Manual of Style, it may be available to use for free at your local library…it is in mine. 


  And FYI, The Associated Press Stylebook used by journalists has different rules.

(Note: The CMOS citation numbers in the answers are from the Sixteenth Edition.)

  Hope you found a nugget in this post that you can use.

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That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for your health and safety during these uncertain times.

cj

No inflation here!! The ebooks of THE DAWGSTAR and DEATH ON THE YAMPA, my fast-paced, exciting thrillers, are now low-priced at $2.99. 

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Sunday, August 21, 2022

The rise and fall of a story

cj Sez: Let’s talk a bit about story and story arc. What follows in this post are excerpts and tidbits of information that I’ve gleaned from many sources over the years.


  First let’s agree that a story needs a beginning, a middle, and an end. What often may be missed, especially by new authors, is that it also needs a story arc—a rise and fall of tension and emotion. Ideally that would happen in every scene, but certainly in every chapter and absolutely an overall arc that carries the reader and character development from the beginning to the end. 

  The term “story arc” was coined in 1988 in relation to the American TV series “Wiseguy” and sometimes unfolds over many episodes. In terms of what authors do, the Oxford English Dictionary defines the term this way:  a story arc is “(in a novel, play, or movie) the development or resolution of the narrative or principal theme.” 


   The graphic is attributed to Kurt Vonnegut . . . part of a presentation he gave to illustrate the story arc of “Cinderella.”

For fun or for research, analyze your favorite stories, and see if you can identify the arcs that keep you turning the pages.

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Readers and writers:  If you’re in the Mobile, AL, this is for you:  


  The Mobile Public Library is celebrating 120 years of
service, and on August 25, the organization will host a special author event for best-selling author Carolyn Haines at its designated Literary Landmark, the Ben May Main Library. 

  Haines, a multi-genre author—suspense, horror, mystery, Southern Gothic, humor, the popular Sarah Booth Delaney series and the cat-detective Trouble series—has written more than 70 books. She will discuss her literary career and inspiration, and there will be a question and answer session, followed by a book signing and reception.

  Carolyn Haines is the recipient of numerous awards, including the Lifetime Achievement Award from the Alabama Library Association and the Harper Lee Award for Distinguished Writing. She was inducted into the Alabama Writers Hall of Fame in 2020.

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  That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for your health and safety during these uncertain times. 

cj

  No inflation here: THE DAWGSTAR and DEATH ON THE YAMPA, my fast-paced, exciting thrillers with a smidgen of romance (ala Jane Bond) ebooks, are now lower-priced at $2.99.

P.S.  The Haunted Bookshop has signed paperback copies of my books in stock. TO ORDER my author-graphed books or any book of your choice on-line, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us

P.P.S.  Sorry, pre-signed copies of THE BIG FANG are not yet available at The Haunted Bookshop, but I’m working on that.

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Sunday, August 14, 2022

Re-introducing The Haunted Book Shop

cj Sez: The Haunted Book Shop moved to a new, larger location and had their spectacular, grand re-opening over the weekend.

  With a friendly, helpful, and knowledgeable staff on duty, The Haunted Book Shop has universal appeal for all of Mobile’s residents and visitors. It even has a special place set aside for the kiddos. As one guest reported: “I think the children's book corner was the hit of the evening. The tent stayed full the whole time I was there.”

  A ton of people walked through those inviting red doors during Mobile’s Friday night Art Walk. Be sure to stop by the shop if you’re in the area of Conti and Joachim streets. You’re sure to find that special book you’re looking for . . . but if not, they will order it for you.

  P.S. Their beautiful, book-store cat, Mr. Bingley, was recently voted, in a city-wide contest, “The Cutest Cat in Mobile.”

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  I need to share a recent (and lovely) review of THE DAWGSTAR by Susan Y. Tanner: 
 
 “Be careful what you wish for! Scientist Mirabel wants ‘something more’ from her career or maybe she just wants a new career. What she doesn’t want or expect is to be caught up in a deadly conflict of nations that’s somehow linked to her recent sighting of a mysterious light in the sky. Nor does she want to be caught up in remembered passion with her once-upon-a-husband, CIA special agent, Sully. Or does she?

“Mirabel’s goal is to find out who is behind the spate of deaths around her. Sully’s goal is to keep her safe while identifying the traitor within the organization that has been his life…and might just be his death. As much as this is a story of global conquests, it is also a story of the ties that bind even when we wish they wouldn’t. I fell in love with Ms. petterson’s beautifully flawed characters and, once again, I feel compelled to say 'more Mirabel and Sully, please'.”

Thank. You. Susan!

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For Readers and Writers 

  Whether you’re writing a report for work or starting a new story:

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  That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for your health and safety during these uncertain times.

 cj


No inflation here: 

THE DAWGSTAR and DEATH ON THE YAMPA, my fast-paced, exciting thrillers with a smidgen of romance (ala Jane Bond) ebooks, are now lower-priced at $2.99.

P.S.  The Haunted Bookshop has signed paperback copies of my books in stock. TO ORDER my author-graphed books or any book of your choice on-line, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us

P.P.S.  Sorry, pre-signed copies of THE BIG FANG are not yet available at The Haunted Bookshop, but I’m working on that.

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Sunday, August 7, 2022

Tis the rainy season in Mobile

cj Sez: I’m watching my grass grow and my flowers drown:


  This has been going on for weeks…almost 10 inches of rain fell in July…and believe it or not, a meteorologist says the 38 inches Mobile has received so far this year is a less-than-normal rainfall total. Doesn’t seem like it to me. I have to wear boots to squish through tall, soggy grass on my way to feed the birds in the mornings. ‘Course come Oct (the usual driest month), I’ll be complaining because I have to water my plants.

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  The Mobile Public Library is such a great resource. One of the community groups I belong to wants to investigate applying for a grant and asked if I’d share my editor expertise in reviewing their application. I needed physical examples in my hand so I picked up three books on grant writing from the library. 

  What I’m discovering is that getting a grant proposal approved is a tough nut to crack, and it’s not just because of the application language and format. Seeking local company sponsorships and donations might be the better way to approach fulfilling their need. We’ll see.

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  I’ve been asked to update my author bio with some specific information. I’m hoping that means one of my short stories has been accepted by the editor of an upcoming 2022 anthology. More info to come.  

  I’m still procrastinating on my novel. I thought I had finished it and am in the midst of editing it for the nth time. I really do want to finish the task but somewhere along the way, I’ve lost my enthusiasm for the project. I’m waffling on just about every aspect of the story. 

  One way I’m trying to recharge is to read other authors’ stories. Maybe one of them will start my creative juices flowing again. Or maybe I need to write a short story to submit to a magazine. Being rejected used to get me working harder.

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  That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for your health and safety.

cj


  Grab 'n go: I’ve lowered the prices on my fast-paced, exciting thrillers that have a smidgen of romance (ala Jane Bond) ebooks. 

  Buy THE DAWGSTAR and DEATH ON THE YAMPA for $2.99 now.

P.S.  The Haunted Bookshop has signed paperback copies of my books in stock.

 TO ORDER my author-graphed books or any book of your choice on-line, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us 

P.P.S.  Sorry, pre-signed copies of THE BIG FANG are not yet available at The Haunted Bookshop, but I’m working on that.

➜ Follow me on . . .           
➜ Amazon:    Amazon Central Author Page
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