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Sunday, August 25, 2024

A GUEST POST today by author Kathleen Kaska

cj Sez: Lyrical Pens is excited to present a guest post today by Kathleen Kaska, the author of the Kate Caraway Animal-Rights Mystery Series as well as the award-winning Sydney Lockhart Mystery Series set in the 1950s.
 

  Kaska generously shares her experiences as she pursued new publishers for her books that had been previously published. Following is the author's “Here’s My Road to Reissue,” a very interesting take on that process.  

“I learned a long time ago to take advice and seemingly factual information with a grain of salt. Once, a librarian told me that if my first book didn’t become an instant best-seller, I’d have a difficult time getting anyone to publish my second book. Thirteen books later, I’m glad I didn’t act on her information. Later, when the publisher of my first four Sydney Lockhart mysteries folded, someone also told me that it would be nearly impossible to find a new publisher for books that were previously published. I didn’t listen to them either. I had big plans for several more books in this series, so when the rights were reverted to me, I began doing my homework and searching for a new publisher.

When my first book came out in the early 90s, the publishing options were simple and straightforward but limited. Writers looked for an agent or contacted publishers directly, sent their submissions, and waited, and waited, and waited. Simultaneous submissions were frowned upon, so the process worked against the writer.

Over the years, I’ve signed with numerous publishers. My experience with the university press that published my biography, The Man Who Saved the Whooping Crane: The Robert Porter Allen Story, was/is amazing. When I have questions or need something, I call them. And guess what? They answer the phone! They were open to negotiating my contract, and my royalty statements are accurate and arrive on time. The same is true for the publishers of my trivia books. Not so true with the first two publishers of my mysteries. So, I learned to be cautious. I’ve learned to ask questions. I’ve learned to recognize publishers who accept manuscripts despite not having read them.

The good news is that now there are thousands of traditional small presses, hybrid presses, and self-publishing options. The less-than-good news is that a writer has to know the business, study the contracts, know when to negotiate, and be able to recognize a good deal. With this in mind, I knew I wanted a publisher who would work with me, answer my emails, listen to my suggestions, give me honest, helpful advice and feedback, brainstorm with me on promotion and marketing ideas, give me reasonable discounts on purchasing my books, connect me with her network of published authors, and above all, care about my books. I know that’s asking a lot, but writing is hard work, and I did not want to sell myself short.

   Three years ago, I signed with Anamcara Press, and I couldn’t be happier. My publisher conducted a thorough edit on each previously published book, rebranded the entire series, which now includes two new books, and provided me with a publicist who helped me schedule book tours and kept me involved every step of the way. We meet virtually several times before each new release, tweaking the cover, metadata, and book blurbs. 

   I trust her expertise and experience. I’m selling more books than I ever have. And to top it all off, she is a nice person.”

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cj Sez: 

   For your reading enjoyment, here’s the cover and buy link to the reissue of MURDER AT THE ARLINGTON, Book 1 (of 6) in her Sydney Lockhart mystery series.


  Thank you, Kathleen, for the tips and reassurances. Yep, it’s going to take work, but if we writers will do our due diligence research, there are several publishing options available for that previously published book. 
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  Okay, that’s it for today. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for a happy and safe you and yours.

cj

Now some words from my sponsors:

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  Nota bene: Angela Trigg, the RITA Award-winning author and owner of The Haunted Book Shop has a few signed copies of my paperback books in stock. TO ORDER, contact: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us 

  And P.S.: Pop on over to my Amazon Central Author Page to find links to anthologies in which I have a short story. 

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Sunday, August 18, 2024

Readers' wants and expectations

cj Sez: I rediscovered one of my archived posts about my path to creative writing, and I’ve excerpted it here. Hope you can find a useful nugget in here:

Readers have different expectations/wants

  My first drafts are crappy and sparse, mainly for two reasons: First, first drafts are supposed to be crappy, and second. before a screenwriter course turned me on to creative writing, I was once a corporate journalist/editor tasked with relating the gist of a story in limited line space.

  When I’m finished with the first draft, and the manuscript has its usual dearth of details, I start work expanding details: The five senses…hear, see, taste, smell, feel… and the who, what, when, where, why, and how of the plot.

  I incorporate some action descriptors, but I consider too many of them stage directions. Some writers use them much like adverbs to “tell” their readers what to think or as a way to add words to a short manuscript.
 
  Action needs to have purpose. If describing an action doesn't contribute to the reader's knowledge of the character, scene conflict, or mood, then it’s stage direction. I write mostly suspense and thrillers and have a minimalist approach to action—using few words speeds up the pace and heightens the tension. On the other hand, readers of cozy mysteries or more narrative-based novels want, and expect, to know every detail.

  Adding or withholding detail is a good way to control the pace of your novel. Even in suspense and thrillers, there are places where the reader needs a breather from the action. These would be the spots where I add more detail or beats. Places where I can reveal more of the characters’ growth, i.e., transformation, as the plot progresses.

  Hint: Adding detail words slows the pace; being stingy speeds it up.

  When action is needed to set some mood for the scene, then yes, I detail the action. Sometimes I add details to slow the action and increase the tension. If I want a character to give the reader a sense of impending danger and fear, then I add more description to the action. I tend to follow the lead of my favorite authors—Robert Parker and James Lee Burke. Their succinct style of writing is what I like to read, and it is their fans who are my target market.

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Author and Reader Notes

Be sure to stop by next week when Kathleen Kaska, author of the award-winning Sydney Lockhart Mystery Series shares her path to securing a publisher to reissue her books.

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  In a recent Jane Friedman blog post, Susan DeFreitas (@manzanitafire), an award-winning author, editor, and book coach, says writers can make their protagonist “too good.”


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Author quote:
  “All writing is difficult. The most you can hope for is a day when it goes reasonably easily. Plumbers don’t get plumber’s block, and doctors don’t get doctor’s block; why should writers be the only profession that gives a special name to the difficulty of working, and then expects sympathy for it?”  —Philip Pullman

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Congratulations to fellow Mobile Writers Guild member Carrie Dalby on the upcoming release of LOYALTY, the third book in her meticulously researched historical Washington Square Secrets series. 

  LOYALTY will launch August 27 and is currently available for preorder.  Buy Loyalty Now      

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  Okay, that’s it for today. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for a happy and safe you and yours.

cj

Now some words from my sponsors:

  THE DAWGSTAR and DEATH ON THE YAMPA are available on Amazon or through your favorite eTailer and bookstore. Got a library card? You can read the ebooks free from Hoopla.


  Nota bene: My local indy book store, The Haunted Book Shop, has a few signed copies of my paperback books in stock. TO ORDER, contact: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us 

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Sunday, August 11, 2024

A fear of failure is not all that rare

cj Sez:  I once saw a TV interview with James Patterson and learned that his first novel was rejected thirty-one times before it was published. Even after publication, it didn’t do all that well. Fortunately for his fans, failure didn’t discourage him. 

  So, where did his worldwide success come from, besides having some natural talent for story telling? What he did was set about learning and analyzing the genre he wanted to write, so he could become the best writer he could be. Like most authors (I think the generalization is true), he started out writing part-time because he had a day job. Now, he writes full-time, every day but Sunday. His books have sold millions of copies worldwide.

  From bios I’ve read, many, if not all, successful writers have some fear of failure, especially at the beginning of their careers. Perhaps they get an idea they’re excited to develop. The words flow like magic onto the page, but the farther they get into the writing, the more they start to second-guess their story-telling abilities. Doubts creep in: Someone’s already told this story, better. No one is going to read this drivel. It’ll never sell.
 
  If you want to reduce your chances of failure, study the craft: workshops, conferences, writers’ groups, read-read-read, analyze-analyze-analyze, and publish a professional, well-edited book.

  I also suggest that you write for yourself first. When you’re the only one you have to please, it reduces the writer’s block stress of arranging coherent sentences into a story arc on a blank page.

  What was the first thing you wrote? A poem? A memoir? A little piece of fiction? If you’re like me, you kept it and every once in a while, you resurrect it and wonder, “Not so bad." or "What was I thinking?”

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Author and Reader Notes


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  This recent guest post on Jane Friedman’s blog is by Lisa Fellinger, an author, book coach, and editor. She says: “I have a small confession to make: I’ve never been told I need to cut words from my manuscripts. In fact, I’m the author envious of anyone who needs to do so because I’m the one struggling to get my manuscript up to my target word count.”  

(cj sez: This is so me, and I thought there might be some of my readers also struggling with what I call “tight writing.”)

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“Every sentence must do one of two things—reveal character or advance the action.” Kurt Vonnegut

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  Since authors are also readers, this applies to everyone: There are three simple ways to encourage and support authors without spending an extra dime.

  Like, comment, and share authors' Facebook posts. Facebook's algorithms show only posts that FB thinks other members would like to see. That means the more likes and comments a post gets, the more people will see it. (Psst: The same process works for Amazon.)

  Take a few moments to give the book you just read a fair review. If all you can manage is one or two sentences, no matter because it will be deeply appreciated.

  Go to book signings. in-person or virtual, even if you can’t afford to buy the book at that time. Your attendance is encouraging.

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School started in Mobile this past week. Don’t know about the students, but the teachers were fully involved.

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  Okay, that’s it for today. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for a happy and safe you and yours.

cj

Now some words from my sponsors:
  Summer is winding down and having a book to read is the perfect entertainment for those downtime moments. THE DAWGSTAR and DEATH ON THE YAMPA are available on Amazon or through your favorite eTailer and bookstore. Got a library card? You can read the ebooks free from Hoopla.



  Nota bene: Angela Trigg, the RITA Award-winning author and owner of The Haunted Book Shop has a few signed copies of my paperback books in stock. TO ORDER, contact: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us 

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Sunday, August 4, 2024

Protag interview and some upcoming events

cj Sez: Today, I’m interviewing Dr. Mirabel Campbell, the protagonist in the novel, THE DAWGSTAR.


Lyrical Pens: Dr. Campbell, tell us a little bit about yourself. What do you do for a living? Any hobbies?
 
Mirabel Campbell, PhD.: Call me Mirabel, please. I’m a botanist, and I’ve just finished working on the international genome project. Before you ask, I was studying the genomes of plants, not people. Finishing the project allowed me to spend more time with my new hobby, astronomy. The skies around Mendocito, California, where I live are super dark and perfect for star-gazing.
 
LP:
So, you traded a microscope for a telescope. 

MC: When you say it that way, my life sounds pretty boring. Neither activity by itself is exciting by any stretch of the imagination, but let me tell you, the two of them together? You know how people say, ‘What you don’t know can’t hurt you?’ I found out what I didn’t know could kill me.
 
LP: Oh wow. What happened?
 
MC: One night I was out with my brand-new telescope and spotted what I thought was a new comet. That chance sighting was nearly the death of me. I became the target of a sociopathic assassin and got dragged into the middle of an international crisis—we’re talking foreign intrigue, DARPA, and the CIA. Obviously I survived. but two people close to me didn’t. That’s all I can tell you because of national security issues. The things that can be made public are revealed in cj petterson’s tell-all book, THE DAWGSTAR.
 
Lyrical Pens says: THE DAWGSTAR is a suspenseful thriller with a touch of rekindled romance when Mirabel’s ex-husband is the CIA agent assigned to keep what she saw from going public and to provide 24/7 protection.

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More Author and Reader Notes

  Congratulations to P.M. Raymond, the winner of the Sisters in Crime 2024 Eleanor Taylor Bland Award for Crime Writers of Color! 

  From the SinC announcement: “Raymond’s winning submission, ‘A Nasty Business’ is set on a Louisiana farm where a family tradition forces the heirs to compete in a series of grueling tasks.”

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  This year’s annual Alabama Writers Cooperative (AWC) conference for writers, readers, and literary community.is happening September 6-8, 2024, in Orange Beach, AL.

 For more info, click on the following link:  2024 Conference — Alabama Writers Cooperative

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CALLAHAN IN ACTION, Book 6 in the Cat Callahan Mystery Series, is scheduled to launch August 8, and it's available for preorder. Click on the link below so you can put your name on a copy now:  https://books2read.com/CatCallahan6  I got mine ordered.

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  LOYALTY, book 3 in author Carrie Dalby’s Washington Square Secrets series, releases August 27, 2024. And it’s available for pre-order now!

“In the autumn of 1920, a murder-suicide shakes the residents of Washington Square. Officer Jim Abbott doesn’t realize the return of his shellshock is only the beginning of his concerns.”

  Original watercolor featured on the cover is by Mobile Bay area artist Amanda Manley. 

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  Okay, that’s it for today. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. Raising prayers for a happy and safe you and yours. (P.S.A.: Counting August, there are five monthly paydays until Christmas.)

cj

Now some words from my sponsors:
  Summer is winding down, but having a book to read is the perfect entertainment for summer vacation downtime moments. THE DAWGSTAR and DEATH ON THE YAMPA are available on Amazon or through your favorite eTailer and bookstore. Got a library card? You can read the ebooks free from Hoopla.


  Nota bene: Angela Trigg, the RITA Award-winning author and owner of The Haunted Book Shop has a few signed copies of my paperback books in stock. TO ORDER, contact: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us 

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